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Deep Blue

April 10, 2010
By mariahLynn SILVER, Craig, Colorado
mariahLynn SILVER, Craig, Colorado
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Going deeper,
Deeper into the blue
Pressure's building up,
I am not wanting to
come to the surface.

I'm wanting to go deeper into the blue,
To drown in my pool of lies,
Lies I told myself..

Falling deeper until I feel,
the burning in my lungs
wanting air.

Going deeper
Deeper into the blue
Till its ice cold,
The pain with
The sayings of lies
Is ice cold.
I suffocate.

The author's comments:
Writing what I felt at that moment.

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_Elsy_ said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 7:10 pm

my screen name is _Elsy_

Teen Ink just won't let me login or logout so it won't show the name

_Elsy_ said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 6:53 pm
wow is all i can say :D, you are a good poet and i can relate to your poem. Can you check out some of my stuff?

ktbug96 SILVER said...
on May. 18 2010 at 4:20 pm
ktbug96 SILVER, Jericho, New York
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
~Make a wish, it's up to you, find the strength inside, and watch your dreams come true, you don't need a shooting star, the magic's right there in your heart, close your eyes, believe, and make a wish~ (yes it's from a song :D)

thanks for the comment :) i love this poem... i can really relate to this because ... well... i have a lot of pressure on me xD

great job!