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The First Time

June 4, 2010
By RosyOptimism DIAMOND, Coronado, California
RosyOptimism DIAMOND, Coronado, California
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I saw you and you saw me
Together is how we should be
My smile matched yours and yours matched mine
You asked how I was, and I said fine
I asked the same, and you said great
Meeting you was truly fate

Shyly you asked me out for dinner
I felt as if I were the lottery winner
You said, “I’ll pick you up at eight”
I said, "That would be really great"

Tonight would be our last first date.

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on Jul. 6 2010 at 12:18 pm
smilebright BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"Your only in trouble if you get caught"- Aladdin

Its a great poem. i love the story line.

PLEASE, comment on my work