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The one who followed

June 19, 2010
By yellowflower SILVER, Basking Ridge, New Jersey
yellowflower SILVER, Basking Ridge, New Jersey
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In every story there is
A leader
In every song
A soloist
In every race
A winner
But what about
The one who followed
Who sat by the step of ambition
And was lead by others
Where is he?
Who caught the
When he stumbled
Who questioned
Making the leader develop
When the journey is over
Where is he?
He who believed
In the start
Who saw the stars meet the leader
And followed.

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This article has 4 comments.

on May. 30 2011 at 8:23 am
yellowflower SILVER, Basking Ridge, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 47 comments
Thank you!

on May. 29 2011 at 4:32 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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Wow, that is freaking wonderful! I love it! :)

on Jul. 21 2010 at 2:00 pm
CrazyWriter GOLD, Lorton Station, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Once you have given up on the most important thing in your life, you begin to die, because then, you gradually lose your true self"~Hana Kimi
"Someone who can lie to themself. . . is lonely, and in pain"~Hana Kimi

i love it! this is awesome! I mean i love how you start to the readers to ask themselves : what did happened to the other guy? you know the one who was always there or the best friend? Keep it up!! please write more articoles like this one!!

on Jul. 21 2010 at 12:25 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

Perfect. Absolutely perfect. I loved it. I usually like to give a bit of advice even if it's great, but I can't say anything. Flow, meaning, everything was perfect.