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No one

June 29, 2010
By snoopy4me PLATINUM, Sandy Hook, Connecticut
snoopy4me PLATINUM, Sandy Hook, Connecticut
22 articles 69 photos 124 comments

No one understands.
I clean up the table-
But you blame me for the crumbs.

No one understands.
My heart cries for your love
But you laugh.

In my mind it makes
Perfect sense. But
No one understands.

I relentlessly seek but
I never find-
No love.
No one understands.

I stumble over myself-
But you walk right past.
No one understands.

I die inside with that
Fake smile on my face.
No one understands.

¬¬¬¬ I’m lost and lonely
Abandoned by you.
No forgiveness.
No one understands.

So I’ve given up on you
As you have on me.
I’m sick on searching
For your inexistent love.

But my thirst-
It remains.
I’m still deserted
And no one understands.

I’m on the floor
Begging for someone-
To understand.

The author's comments:
I don't really feel this way about the person I was writing about, but I take my anger out on paper, so in the heat of the moment it was easy to take my feelings to the extreme.

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on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:08 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
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