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Ocean Illumination

June 21, 2010
By sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
63 articles 28 photos 33 comments

Waves crashing
Sun glistening
Yet invigorating
A spotlight on the horizon
A pathway to paradise
The dark blues and greens
A wave forms
The darkness, the mystery
Thins and
A new crystal clear blue appears
As light as my heart,
It illuminates the darkness
The water is glassy
‘Til the wave breaks and
The water recedes off the shore

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sam013 DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 5 2010 at 6:40 pm
sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
63 articles 28 photos 33 comments
thanks everyone! your support really means a lot

on Sep. 4 2010 at 7:39 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

You should be proud to be the author of such a poem. Words... often an essential tool for beauty. This piece, my friend, inspired beauty in its every line. I present you with applause.

on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:11 am
lyss--Scifi-lover SILVER, Madera, California
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Truth Never Grows Old-

I like How you use nature to tell the story for you how you use it to express strong emotions in an understandeble way I really like it

on Jul. 27 2010 at 5:46 pm
CourtneyLou BRONZE, SLIDELL, Louisiana
3 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some would rather be miserable then risk being happy ~Robert Anthony

This is interesting I reallly like it :)