Freedom | Teen Ink


December 12, 2010
By Delilah_Black GOLD, Cedar Hill, Texas
Delilah_Black GOLD, Cedar Hill, Texas
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When I die, I don't want to be remembered as the person I was, but as the person I am.
The person who is free from the world, free of all the judgment and pain.
The person who made it through the world and can still love, laugh, and forgive.

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ellie315 GOLD said...
on Jan. 6 2011 at 10:41 pm
ellie315 GOLD, South Pasadena, California
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Favorite Quote:
"And this, our life, exempt from public haunt, finds tongues in trees, books in the running brooks, sermons in stones, and good in everything." -- William Shakespeare

The last piece doesn't fit, and it kind of makes the poem cliche. But as a writer myself, I see the amazing value of the first two parts. :) This is great!

on Dec. 17 2010 at 7:09 pm
drowning-in-sorrow GOLD, Randallstown, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
Don't make someone a priority if they only make you an option.

this is amazing!

on Dec. 15 2010 at 12:14 pm
poetrydiva93 BRONZE, Ferguson, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"..Never let the fear of striking out..keep u from playing the game.."

Great job,i agree a hundred percent!