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Friend, Foe, or My Love?

December 13, 2010
By JATBZ GOLD, Winfield, Kansas
JATBZ GOLD, Winfield, Kansas
11 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Always do right. This will gratify some people and astonish the rest.”
Mark Twain

When we are close,
I have to wonder is this her?
Do I really have a chance?
When I see her face all I think is,
Will this be my closest person in my life?
Do I need to push?
When we hug,
I never want to end,
But does it really mean anything?
When we talk I have to wonder,
Is this my angel?
Is this perfection?
...... But, when I think all these things,
Am I good enough?
Will I pull her down?
Does she even look at me,
Or just see me as one of many windows?
Good to have but, could live without.
What do I do?
I love her happiness and her,
but her happiness and her security much more.

The author's comments:
There is this girl I like, but not only I don't think she likes me, I don't think I deserve her. Comment about the writing or advise, if you please.

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on Jan. 13 2012 at 7:54 am
Kparker27 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
30 articles 17 photos 101 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the end, it's still best to wait for the one we want rather than settle for what's available. It's still best to wait for the one you love rather than to settle for the one who's around. It's still best to wait for the right person, because life's too short to waste on the wrong one."

nice....was wondering who this is?? I am in your class of 2012 also.