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Half hearted

April 9, 2011
By SmallTownGirl SILVER, Oakley, California
SmallTownGirl SILVER, Oakley, California
5 articles 3 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you dont risk anything you risk even more.

heart breaks
into two
the half
that he loves
and the half
that loves you
whats best
you know
to leave
right now,
you cant
find a
way out.

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on May. 9 2011 at 7:29 pm
Kfuzesi13 SILVER, Someplace, New Jersey
5 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right."
-Markus Zusak, The Book Theif

My favorite part about this poem was the way it sounds. To me it emphasizes the feeling of being trapped. Good job.