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I Dance

April 6, 2011
By CaptainFabulous GOLD, Gray Summit, Missouri
CaptainFabulous GOLD, Gray Summit, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes I believe in as many as six impossible things before breakfast" - Lewis Carroll

I dance,
to the sweetness of my agony.
With each footfall of a tear,
I swoon.
My wide eyes, so blissful,
so blue,
yet leaving me empty hearted.
I sing,
along to the song of pain.
Awaiting the arrival of hope,
I cherish,
the moments that never last.
And at times I think I cant,
I am,
and it makes me dance.

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neshkuh GOLD said...
on Aug. 21 2011 at 12:48 am
neshkuh GOLD, Lower Mainland, Other
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I really like this! Especially partial to it since i'm a dancer :) Thanks for all the comments on my work btw! 

on Jun. 20 2011 at 7:42 am
dolphin13 BRONZE, North St. Paul, Minnesota
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Wonderful poem! You are a very talented writer!

on Jun. 19 2011 at 4:09 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.
~Some random person on the Internet :P

Very cool how you described things in detail without really just coming out and saying what you meant, until the end of course. I love all of it, but the last three lines tie it all together and that's why they're my favorite part.