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Pretty Monster

May 14, 2011
By shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

"It's like a game," she says in a sing-song voice. "A cruel
Sort of game," she admits with a malicious smile and
Low gurgling laugh.
The pretty monster spins as she invites
Herself to picnic in my favorite garden
Where she can lie in the warm sunny day and eat.
She finishes her lunch, stolen from my fridge, and soon
Begins her exploration of the labyrinth of my thoughts.
Her footsteps move too quickly to follow, though I try,
As she ravages and searches me looking for something
She cannot find.
Lost and wandering to the garden I left,
I discover,
The once beautiful begonias
Have withered in the hard, dry soil, rotted flowers of
The regal roses now drop unnoticed to the ground,
And too late I realize that she has locked every door
To the mind of my imagination.

The author's comments:
Eating disorder.

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on Jan. 24 2012 at 10:12 am
falling-rain GOLD, Layton, Utah
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Getr done!
larry the cable guy

hey this is really good... i enjoyed it and am looking forward to more like this,keep writing:)

on Jul. 26 2011 at 8:43 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

tres bon captain! i do love the last line, 4+5,8,10+11, and so on. very nice. it would be conducive for you to do your dance at the time which is now.