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Breathlessly Enchanted

May 16, 2011
By Carmella_Hastings GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
Carmella_Hastings GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us." -Walt Emerson

Big brown eyes,
Long, teasing lashes,
Laughing aloud
As I he abashes.
Does he notice
How I can’t stop grinning?
I feel like Charlie Sheen-
Forever and always winning.
Softly spoken,
Contagious laughter,
How I wish he could see
My vision of ever after.
One day he’ll know,
One day he’ll see
That the thing he’s been looking for
Is- and has always been- me.
His eyes are in my mind,
Forever implanted.
Leaving me foolishly,
Breathlessly enchanted.

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on Jun. 17 2011 at 1:51 am
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.
~Some random person on the Internet :P

Wow. This is wonderful! The rhyme scheme flows perfectly, and your word choice is excellent. You are a very talented writer! :)

on Jun. 16 2011 at 3:59 pm
BehindBlueEyes BRONZE, Kearny, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
We are all a little weird and life's a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love. ~Author Unknown

This brings up my emotions that I'm feeling and describes perfectly what I feel, right down to the eyes. Great woork