July 8, 2011
By poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
23 articles 3 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:

Star and Angel

I thought Saturn was a star, a super star;
But was just fooling myself?
I thought an angel would have golden hair;
But was I really so blind?

A star or an angel could be anything.
A rock, or a tree, or a paper and pen.
A slug, or a fire, or a ball and chain.
A goose or a duckling;
A raven, a fool.....

But no one has been as perfect as you.

The author's comments:
Here is something I wrote recently, not my favorite for sure, but thought I would share all the same!

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on Jul. 15 2011 at 10:09 pm
Silent_Artist SILVER, Selma, North Carolina
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One day I'm gonna run away and never come back and when I come back I'm gonna be the knife master" - Jimmy The Rev Sullivan. Not much of a deep meaning but it makes me laugh.

I think you forgot to put I in the second line. Besides that, It's a fun, creative poem.

sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 4:12 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
18 articles 13 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

It's nice...Y dont you check out some of my work...:)

on Jul. 14 2011 at 8:05 pm
emanmkhan SILVER, Austin, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"People will forget what you said. People will forget what you did. But people will never forget how you made them feel.\" Maya Angelou

It's a pretty simple poem, but it makes me think for a while...

on Jul. 14 2011 at 4:32 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Very cute! I like how you say that a star and an angel could be anything. Very creative!