Jubilee | Teen Ink


September 11, 2011
By HoldingFast GOLD, Plano, Texas
HoldingFast GOLD, Plano, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If I wasn't meant to fly, I wouldn't have these wings"

Something inside me is just screaming to cry.
Something inside me is just dying to try.
Halting the wave of desire,
Burying it deeper,
Freezing it in my core.

Holding back the floodgates.
Storming through the vale.
My Heart's flag burning in the dusk.
The journey of eternity,
Alone in the knowledge of forever.
Thousands brought together,
Yet one heart
Don't walk away.

My sorrow fleeing,
The pain of ages, obliterated.
Freedom through Unity.
A hand and soul showing me the way,
Releasing my tears,
And freeing my fears.
Safety and Comfort,
My heart no longer bound.
My soul flying towards the sky.

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on Mar. 29 2013 at 2:49 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Your word choice! WOW! I love the rhythm to it and all of your poems; it's mystifying yet makes me want to read it over and over and over. I love how you capitalized "heart"; it gave the word LOTS more emphasis/meaning. I love your writing style - don't ever stop writing. You've definitely got smething special!!

Taconut7 GOLD said...
on Apr. 16 2012 at 9:39 pm
Taconut7 GOLD, Cohasset, Minnesota
17 articles 1 photo 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life's challenges are not to bring you down, they are to help you become a stronger and better person! -Me

"If you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will forever live its life believing it is stupid." - Albert Einstein

I really like how I can relate to this because I have had a personal stuggle myself.