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A Night Untouched

November 7, 2011
By katsdaydreamtoo BRONZE, West Jordan, Utah
katsdaydreamtoo BRONZE, West Jordan, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Always have a purpose and if you don't, make one up!

As you look across a flawless view,
You start to notice all the beauty around you.
All the tall proud trees reaching up from the ground
And the hunting owl careful not to make a sound.
There is a glassy lake untouched by the world
With a story behind it never to be unfurled.
The big bright moon strung high in the sky,
Watches the world sleep as the many years go by.
What a peaceful moment
What a breathless scene
All the world has stopped around you
Yet it’s only a dream.

The author's comments:
I'm not the most outspoken person and I thought it was time I could express myself.

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Wow!  This is amazing!  Love it!

taylor1226 said...
on Nov. 13 2011 at 12:12 am
taylor1226, Alexandria, Virginia
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awesome poem.:P 

if you get a chance you should check out my work.

carebear said...
on Nov. 11 2011 at 11:48 pm
That was beautiful. Absolutely amazing :)