Solitary | Teen Ink


November 23, 2011
By Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
11 articles 1 photo 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who'll decide where you'll go." -Dr. Seuss

No longer a unit.
Standing side by side.
Yet I think about you everyday, Everyday tears fill my eyes.

What we were,
Used to be
Feels erased,
A fading memory.

One that began
Long ago.
One that saved me
From being alone.

As that memory fades
And I have become lonesome,
You'll always have a piece of my heart.
A heart that's dark and broken.

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Aginger GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 2:04 pm
Aginger GOLD, Bingen, Washington
11 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why are you so busy trying to fit in when you were born to stand out?"

This is absolutely wonderful. I love the dark intensity of it, and he fact that all of those feelings are so common and true. Why does love have to be so deceiving and painful at times? I don't know, but someday it shall work out for us! Well done

on Dec. 21 2011 at 7:04 pm
Sherry.K SILVER, Jakarta, Illinois
6 articles 0 photos 27 comments

I love this, i can relate to it in so many ways... the words flow so easily, amazing job :) i rated it 5 stars.


ps.. could you give me some feedback too? thanks

on Dec. 20 2011 at 9:16 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
23 articles 3 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:

Totally sad, but beautiful!