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Do You? I Don't

November 15, 2011
By RebeccaJoy DIAMOND, Springville, New York
RebeccaJoy DIAMOND, Springville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes it's kinda fun to do the impossible." -Walt Disney
"Go live your dream"-Disney's Tangled

Do you remember or kiss?

Kissing is so simple.
Do you remember that night?

Now I get his thinking.
Do you remember your lies?

Lying is easy sin.
You lied to my face.

Forcing actions, cries escaped.
You don't deserve my tears.

Today, everything, anything relieves stress.
You deserve what is coming.

Cause open-minded imaginations new growth.
I hope you're happy.

Hatred and pain present you.
I hope you learned a lesson.

Loneliness eats slowly, surviving on nothing.
I hope I'll understand it.

Increasing terror.
Don't expect anything from me.

Memories escape.
Don't try to get me back.

Bad actions can kill.
Don't do this to another.

Ash, now on the heart, entering respectfully.

The author's comments:
The last word in every other line is spelled out with the beginning letters of the next line. I did that on purpose. If you read the even lines they have their own story. I ended up getting the title from the pattern of repetition in the beginning words. That was not on purpose.

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on Feb. 14 2012 at 8:59 am
CourtCourt DIAMOND, Franklinville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
2 Corinthians 12:9
But he said to me, “My grace is sufficient for you, for my power is made perfect in weakness. ” Therefore I will boast all the more gladly about my weaknesses, so that Christ’s power may rest on me.

i love this!!! Fantastic job!!!