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Our Real Life Theatrical Show

January 1, 2012
By SN3RD BRONZE, Glendale, Arizona
SN3RD BRONZE, Glendale, Arizona
3 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm the bugs bunny, and if you ain't got my carrots, you ain't got nothin' for me!" --Nicki Minaj

We swore we'd be together forever
We made a promise to never part
But I guess it's karma for saying 'never'
You've removed my space in your heart.
I'll try to erase our memories
I'll burn everything that reminds me of you.
I'll lock them away with multiple keys
But that isn't all that I will do.
I'll scream at your pictures
And claw out your face
You won't be my fixture
I'll block your number, just in case.
But the reality is:
It might take years.
The truth of the matter is:
I've cried way too many tears.
So I'm saying good-bye
I'm letting you know
I now see you as the bad guy
In our real life theatrical show.

The author's comments:
I was going through a hardship, and still am with friends, and this poem couldn't describe any better how I felt and what I wanted to do.

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This article has 5 comments.

on Jan. 6 2012 at 11:22 pm
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

Nice poem. Brings back memories of what I went through last year.. I like things I can relate to.

on Jan. 6 2012 at 11:40 am
praveen.Trichy PLATINUM, Thirchy, Other
25 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
cruel leaders are replaced only to turn other leaders cruel

Nice.....I love ur work...keep writing

on Jan. 4 2012 at 4:21 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

This was very good, the rhyming gives it nice flow and keeps the reader interested...me and you write in like the same way XD very good poem, 5 outta 5 =)

on Jan. 4 2012 at 3:44 pm
satellite23 GOLD, Cincinnati, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
Prove it.

Very nice and quick, nice rhythm, but a little too cliche and..."pop" for me. But overall pretty decent.

on Jan. 3 2012 at 11:05 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 373 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

This is great! I love the flow and rhythm. It was well done and very emotional.