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chain-link fence

February 23, 2012
By chrisvfree PLATINUM, N/A, Florida
chrisvfree PLATINUM, N/A, Florida
37 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
I pretty much try to stay in a constant state of confusion just because of the expression it leaves on my face. - Johnny Depp

grime and
faded ink

black crows
the sunken
power line

rusted metal—
weathered poster—
signs of
effort long since failed

a man
on the edge of
Shadow Street

head in hands

hands on knees

is it the colour of

long gone are
the traces of cloud

but still
the rain won’t

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on Feb. 29 2012 at 6:53 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"

This poem is like a stretched-out haiku to me, it's got the same sort of bitter-sweet emotion and a far-eyed sort of whisper-voice to it, The last verse especially.