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A Good Friend Dies

March 22, 2012
By necci SILVER, Denver, Colorado
necci SILVER, Denver, Colorado
8 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Women are many things to humans, but the one thing they are not is dominated by men.
-If a single act of hate can do so much damage, what can a single act of kindness do?

A girl was walking down the street
very kind to all she meets
with baby blue eyes and sunshine hair
she stops and looks to make sure noones there
then she crys and crys
through tear filled eyes
for she knows a good friend dies
a friend of love a friend of hope
and shes stuck with pain she cannot cope
then a woman comes with a giant grin
since she knows her plan will win
this woman of hatred, filled with despise
she takes over as a good friend dies
this womans the devil a heart full of coal
is against your friend wich is your soul
i warn you be careful on what you do
or this woman will get you too

The author's comments:
i have seen alot of people around me hurt others for no reason and i am against it because as everyone knows it isnt right so this poem shows what will happen to them if they keep it up

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This article has 5 comments.

Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Dec. 26 2012 at 3:08 pm
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
19 articles 0 photos 420 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

This is really very nice... I just love it...!!!

elizamc83 GOLD said...
on Jun. 18 2012 at 6:38 pm
elizamc83 GOLD, Concord, Massachusetts
17 articles 0 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"From now on, I don't care if my tea leaves spell 'Die, Ron, die,' I'm chucking them in the bin where they belong." -Ron Weasley

this is a good poem! there are a few minor grammar/spelling things, but overall, you conveyed the message really well, and I liked it :)

on Jun. 18 2012 at 6:28 pm
Jappyalldayeveryday, Detroit, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
They say that good things take time, but really great things happen in the blink of an eye

I really like this, especially the beginning. I can picture everything in my mind, and it flows very smooth, reminding me of a song. Great job!

E-chan SILVER said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 9:41 am
E-chan SILVER, Denver, Colorado
5 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I did not see because I didn't wish to see"
-Prince of Egypt

awsome poem and i think it's true when some one mocks another. when that happen to me at school i was devestated

on Apr. 5 2012 at 11:14 pm
bloodroselove SILVER, Spring Mills, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 33 comments
wow...very good poem! i can feel the emotions radiating off of each word and line awesome job! life is a writers greatest inspiration