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Deep Hatred

March 23, 2012
By I-Love-EDM SILVER, Hamilton, New Jersey
I-Love-EDM SILVER, Hamilton, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding. It is the bitter potion by which the physician within you heals your sick self. Therefore, trust the physician. Drink from its cup of remedy in silence and tranquility.

Deep Hatred

The world so cold.
Love is so faded.
Evil is so present.
This is called deep hatred.

Children are neglected.
Wisdom has degraded.
Destroying has become common.
This is called deep hatred.

Minds have become twisted.
Kindness has been shaded.
We put each other down.
This is called deep hatred.

Lets come together as one.
Lets show that love is sacred.
Lets not be so cold.
Lets not show deep hatred.

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on Feb. 25 2014 at 2:39 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

Wow! definatley true and amazing talent! keep writing and show that world what youve got!

on Sep. 12 2012 at 1:36 pm
dolphincrazy226 BRONZE, Madison, Alabama
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your idea of using parallelism and repetition definetly gets the emotion through.  But it's a little difficult about what your message is about. It seems a little too ranty, but your format is amazing.  Great job:)

on Sep. 11 2012 at 1:30 pm
LittleLadybird GOLD, Carrickfergus, Other
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To be nobody but yourself in a world that is trying it's hardest every night and day to change you into everyone else is to fight the hardest battle a human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

Love this. Sooo much!! Ur poetry is amazing, u have a real talent for it! :D x

on Jun. 20 2012 at 11:07 am
starzforever GOLD, Sebring, Florida
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this poem is so real this beauitful

on Apr. 13 2012 at 3:57 pm
831onelove GOLD, Woodbridge, Virginia
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"Love can be like heaven, but it can hurt like hell."

Really good poem :) I love how simple it is and yet how powerful the poem it self is. 

on Apr. 12 2012 at 12:35 pm
CaptainStar BRONZE, Estancia, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Your limit is what you make it.

This is really good. I really wish that people would follow these words. Keep up the good writing. :)


on Apr. 12 2012 at 9:46 am
Princesspiper84 SILVER, Lodi, New Jersey
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Motto: There's no life without death, mistakes, and missury

Good job... Plz talk to me now and stop acting  like your some one else because i care alot about u like hwen u went off to surgery all i did was cry so plz talk... you r the closet friend i could get.... plz talk to me

on Apr. 12 2012 at 9:45 am
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER, Morrisville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
\"Imperfection is beauty; madness is genius.
and its better to be absolutely ridiculous
than absolutely boring.\"
-Marilyn Monroe

This is soooo goood, and I think it's really powerful too (: GOOD JOB.