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The new one

April 26, 2012
By Nicole67 PLATINUM, Indianola, Washington
Nicole67 PLATINUM, Indianola, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Someday, someone will walk into your life and make you realize why it never worked out with anyone else."
"we often put up walls not to keep people out, but to see who cares to get through"
“Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind.”

He walked through water as thick as chili,
that looked like chocolate.

Surrounding him was 8-foot tall grass and dark gray sky.

Trying not to make the water splash,
he knelt down to stay hidden.

All around him were big tough guys shooting guns and blowing their enemies up.

Behind him were booms, pops, cracks, screams, and cries.
The wind blew, making the water smack against his knees.

A snake hissed as if afraid of all the sudden explosions.
He showed some odd human characteristics in his face.

Maybe he was a human in his first life.
Then, he stood up and decided to go defend his people.

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on May. 17 2012 at 11:00 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.


you give really good descriptions- i could see the picture in my mind