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The Journey Of My Tears

May 14, 2012
By snowleopard100 PLATINUM, New York City, New York
snowleopard100 PLATINUM, New York City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, but I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference."

Cascading one by one;
from the creases of my bloodshot eyes
down the hook of my polluted nose
through the crimson pastels on my lips
over the tiers of my cobweb dress
and onto the welcome mat that no longer is...

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on May. 25 2012 at 11:34 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Well, I liked it but it was just okay for me. I think you could've expanded on this poem. I like that the poem kind of tapers off, leaving the reader to wonder why the speaker is crying, but I don't know, I just would've liked it a little longer.