Inspired | Teen Ink


June 15, 2012
By ClarinetPower SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
ClarinetPower SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Words pop into my head
Then are gone, as fast as they came
I just don't understand
They should be flowing from me
Just like a river
Instead, I am hunting, chasing
Grasping for that one bit of inspiration
I want my words to come alive
To jump, to reach
But they will never be good enough
So, I crumple them and throw them away
I realize, then, that they are perfect

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on Jan. 23 2013 at 7:46 pm
In_Love_with_Writing GOLD, Easton, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13

Oh my goodness!!! This is perfect as it is and you did a FANTASTIC job at really capturing writer's block and inspiration!!! Amazing job :)

irishlass317 said...
on Oct. 2 2012 at 6:38 pm
irishlass317, Jefferson City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"I asked Jesus 'How much do you love me?' He answered 'This much.' And He streched out His arms and died."

This is really good!! It could use a little work.....more flow in the beginning would be nice. I really like the idea and the last of the execution!! More flow, more balance, and it will be prefect!! Great job!!

on Jun. 28 2012 at 3:43 pm
ClarinetPower SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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