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I miss you

July 30, 2012
By Nichole1994 GOLD, Terre Haute, Indiana
Nichole1994 GOLD, Terre Haute, Indiana
15 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I loved you once, I love you still, I always have, and I always will!"

I miss falling asleep in your arms. You holding me when I cay. I miss the way you use to touch my face and make me shiver. I miss how you use to keep me worm and held me when i cried. I loved it when you would wipe my tears away and whipper in my ear how you will never let me go. How you would do anything to keep me safe and how you would hold me every night. But the truth is that my mom tore us apart and it will never be the same again. Because when I go to bed at night I cry because you are not there. I cant go to certain places with out seeing the memories of us and how happy we use to be. I wish that I could tell you how I fell, have your arms around me, feel you one last time, and fall asleep in your arms. My life would be fulfilled.

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Honour SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 1:45 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
9 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13

"Give me liberty or give me death!" ~Patrick Henry

Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6

"I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery" ~ Thomas Jefferson

This is pretty well written, but they're some mistakes, for exampl you said 'worm' instead of 'warm', and some mistakes in capitalazation.  But other than that's it's a good piece, thanks for sharing.

on Aug. 2 2012 at 1:43 pm
nathalyacosta_, Chatham, Other
0 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hakuna Matata! 'nolite te bastardes carbonrundum' (don't let the bastards grind you down)

Its not bad!! me likey :3