Nightmare | Teen Ink


August 2, 2012
By nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
27 articles 18 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything you do in life is insignificant, but its important you do it anyway ~Ghandi

The man in the moon
Sings me too rest
The orange gentlemen
I love but detest
The devil with red eyes
Laughs and leers
The voices of children
Ring in my ears
The demons laughter
Bouncing off the walls
The gun against my head
Out of my hand it falls
Out of hell into the light
No more fire, no more fight

The author's comments:
I know it doesn't seem like it make a lot of sense but it does to me.

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on Apr. 16 2013 at 5:04 pm
-Hopeless- GOLD, Hudson, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"The lines that have no rhyme, are the ones that mean the most" -Me-

"Are you with me, or will you fall to your knees?" - We came as romans-

This one grasped my attention... it brings back many memories. The imagery it painted in my head is amazing played out,

on Apr. 5 2013 at 1:53 pm
_SlenderMandy_ GOLD, St. Johns, Michigan
13 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm entirely bonkers. But I'll tell you what. All the best people are." - Tim Burton

This is really good! To be honest I'm kinda jelly lol but great job!

on Jan. 31 2013 at 10:00 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."

~Luara Moncur

This was amazing. Absolteul grapsed me! great poem, love the pattern!

on Dec. 13 2012 at 4:11 pm
Trace.C.Schuelke PLATINUM, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
26 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Secrets are secrets for a reason, and some do not wish to see them uncovered. Especially when the secrets are particularly unseemly..."

Short and sweet. The intro sets us up for something we don't see coming, and the title is a very good choice for the poem. Beautiful imagery throughout.