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The Deceptive Sunrise

August 29, 2012
By Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
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That’s why it hurts
Because it sees
Our soul it feels
Every pain around
Each tear
Creates a sound
And it echoes inside
Again and again
Until we have lost all that was then

We try to make it go away
So we could live
We try to brighten up the days
And forgive
Forgive us
For the pained and useless soul
Who runs to escape
From what has been given

Shall we sit and suffer
Shall we lay and cry
What have we done
Oh what have we done
When can we finally cry?

We feel helpless
Help us
Where is the mercy
That they speak of
That we have learned
And then rejected-

Because we felt the tears
Echo through our soul
And saw the black clouds
That the blind does not
The blind world- that smiles
At birds and giggles at the
Deceptive sunrise

Why have you given a gift
And then made it sad?
Our soul is a sad gift
A paradox of infinity
Are eternal scars worth the poetry?

I think not
We think not
Our soul
It feels
This has to stop.

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on Oct. 4 2012 at 4:49 pm
Unglorious BRONZE, Santa Marta, Other
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I really enjoyed it very much ;) keep writing 

riCoa BRONZE said...
on Oct. 4 2012 at 2:08 pm
riCoa BRONZE, Somers, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Show me your moves!" - Captain Falcon

That was really good

on Oct. 3 2012 at 5:59 pm
Shadowpomgurl PLATINUM, Canton, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I was NEVER that drunk." -Johnny Depp as Jack Sparrow

two words... DONT STOP!!!!!!! that was awesome!