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his smile

October 28, 2013
By buttercup102903 BRONZE, Bellevue, Ohio
buttercup102903 BRONZE, Bellevue, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 13 comments

when his smile lights up
the sun shines bright
when his smile goes away
the sun doesn't shine
if he keeps his smile always
the sun will shine forever

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ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

Simple and short yet amazing!

Alycia. BRONZE said...
on Feb. 3 2014 at 7:44 pm
Alycia. BRONZE, Lower Gwynedd, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
“Our lives are not our own. We are bound to others, past and present, and by each crime and every kindness, we birth our future.” -- David Mitchell, Cloud Atlas

Very simple, yet it conveys the message in a powerful manner. Nicely done! 

on Feb. 3 2014 at 12:59 pm
ShannonLaDieu SILVER, Waycross, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The best part of beauty is that no picture can express- Loren blake Chosen House of Night serise
mee-uf-ow!- Nala(Zoey's Cat) House of night Books
since when has public making-out become a turn-on for you?- Zoey Redbird

Its good overall. But maybe switch forever and shine.