The Dark | Teen Ink

The Dark

February 21, 2014
By Dreamer29 SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
Dreamer29 SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
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I sit in the street late at night
Under the moon shining not so bright;
Alone with my thoughts spinning in my head
Towards the darkness I am being lead;
By angels whose wings are secretly black
I feel myself slipping and giving slack;
They call and they scream out to me
For help and a way for them to flee;
Just as they dig in their sleek dark claws
I feel their laughter at all of my flaws;
Then I let myself be carried away
To the land of the dead, where most are astray

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Beila BRONZE said...
on Feb. 25 2015 at 10:40 pm
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco." -Mark Twain

Interesting. Your writing is good, and I love the idea, but I think you could have taken it a step further. Maybe some more descriptions and imagery?