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Angels vs. Devils

March 30, 2014
By JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
27 articles 0 photos 73 comments

we all have wings they can carry us or let us fall they can love us or hate us they can be long and strong or small and feeble they can be white as light or dark as night the way we get them is the way we are they start out small and as we grow they let us fall or let us fly through the heavens watch out for the darkness for it will pull you and tempt you it will carve into you and brand you go to the light it will shine through you help you in all your needs you can be an angel or you can choose the dark side devils go and hurt angels go and help for everything is up to you you are the change in the world the pain people feel is the devils way happiness the angels say we can all be angels if you know the right ways say the right words dream the right dreams angels protect us devils deceive us angels are light that shine through the night

The author's comments:

i wrote this because almost every where i look i see pain and sorrow because of the devils and sometimes i see happiness because of the angels. its you choice to become what you want. you choose.

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This article has 14 comments.

on Sep. 27 2014 at 10:56 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
2 articles 2 photos 347 comments
this is os amazing! i love it, ts so beautiful nice work!

on Jul. 24 2014 at 11:22 pm
MattMattHatter PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
33 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn. "
Thomas Gray

I like the format and the lack of punctuation it made the piece even more interesting. Also, very good word choice :)

Roiel SILVER said...
on May. 23 2014 at 11:27 pm
Roiel SILVER, YouMayneverknow, Oklahoma
9 articles 13 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe that you should never feel compelled to explain yourself if you know your telling the truth.

i like how you rhyme your poems. i cant rhyme that well  

on May. 5 2014 at 10:15 pm
PhoenixTears GOLD, Stansbury Park, Utah
11 articles 6 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life sucks. And then you die." ~Jacob (Twilight)

This is a very inspiring piece of poetry. Bravo!

on Apr. 30 2014 at 5:24 pm
Love2Read72 PLATINUM, Kentfield, California
24 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn’t about how to survive the storm, it’s about learning to dance in the rain.” — Taylor Swift

I like the line, "we all have wings/they can carry us/or let us fall." Very true.

on Apr. 26 2014 at 5:01 pm
CookieMonster24 PLATINUM, Delhi, Other
25 articles 2 photos 147 comments
I am going to be honest. I think it was an excellent poem, and I love the concept and all. But I think it was a bit predictable, I feel like I've heard it so many times before. But I love the way how you phrased certain sentences. I hope you know that I mean well. I think you're a wonderful writer. Goodluck.

on Apr. 24 2014 at 10:51 pm
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
87 articles 0 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

Sure it's sorta generic, sure it's sorta predictable, but I like it. You put a unique twist on a tired concept, so I'll give you credit for that. Not bad. 3.5/5

on Apr. 23 2014 at 8:38 pm
PrinceLion GOLD, Oxnard, California
14 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When you find a diamond, try to break it." ~ Prince

It is an excellent poem. Well written in your own style... I have noticed your particular style in your writing. It is intruiging and just the way it should be if you see it fit :) Keep it up! I'm a fan ;)

on Apr. 23 2014 at 12:48 pm
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
3 articles 0 photos 228 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our passion is our strength."
-Billie Joe Armstrong

I love and read everything you write. you are amazing!!!

on Apr. 17 2014 at 4:50 pm
NOIZTHIMS GOLD, South Jordan, Utah
15 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If your eyes could speak, what... what would they say?" -Max (from "The Book Thief")

i really like your work, I don't really have any advice on how to improve it, so, keep at it...

on Apr. 17 2014 at 1:48 pm
Hells_Will SILVER, Davenport, Washington
7 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Wrists are for bracelets, not cutting" - Kellin Quinn

good work!!! and keep it up!!!

on Apr. 17 2014 at 11:58 am
JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
27 articles 0 photos 73 comments
thank you everybody. i am posting 2 more called Dead and Alone and Never Let It Go

on Apr. 17 2014 at 6:08 am
I_Love_To_Write BRONZE, New Delhi, Other
1 article 0 photos 11 comments
I read almost all your works and see great talent Keep up the good work 

HudaZav SILVER said...
on Apr. 16 2014 at 6:25 pm
HudaZav SILVER, Toronto, Other
8 articles 6 photos 390 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible; the word itself says 'I'm possible'!" -Audrey Hepburn

I really liked this! Especially the line about how wings can be white or black is a good metaphor. Nice job! very creative