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i fell in love with 2

March 30, 2014
By JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
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as i see you i see me
as you see me you see you
the feelings i felt
were always true

but as i look away
i see another me
but this time
its the more mature me

im very truly sorry
ive never loved
never wanted
never cared for
but you

now i see someone i truly love more
cause for me
he is more mature

he is the balance in my footing
i want to make him mine
he is the one
who makes my moon shine

The author's comments:
i fell in love with two people in my school.

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on Jul. 24 2014 at 11:20 pm
MattMattHatter PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn. "
Thomas Gray

I like it!! Although I have to admit I found the last line funny. Do you know what people refer to as moonshine? :P You may wanna look it up

on May. 5 2014 at 10:11 pm
PhoenixTears GOLD, Stansbury Park, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Life sucks. And then you die." ~Jacob (Twilight)

Really great work here! I love it!!!

on May. 4 2014 at 2:38 pm
VartikaSingh GOLD, Ghaziabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
One who make success without any trouble is victory, but one who make a success with lots of trouble is History.

nice poem. I liked it.

on Apr. 28 2014 at 6:20 pm
iimoeloveii GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
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Great work!!!!!!! True poetry

on Apr. 23 2014 at 12:49 pm
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Our passion is our strength."
-Billie Joe Armstrong

"Choose the second 'cause if you really loved the first then you wouldn't have fallen in love again."

dinks PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 22 2014 at 6:28 pm
dinks PLATINUM, Hinsdale, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"and kisses are a better faith than freedom"

Very relatable!

freeday15 GOLD said...
on Apr. 21 2014 at 7:41 pm
freeday15 GOLD, Paramus, New Jersey
18 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is Blind" i truly believe in this it is in all of my pieces, and if u read between the lines then u will find it there...

Falling in love with one person is complicated enough, but two?? Wow, that could be a problem! Good luck!

on Apr. 17 2014 at 1:49 pm
Hells_Will SILVER, Davenport, Washington
7 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Wrists are for bracelets, not cutting" - Kellin Quinn

I know right!!

Jkat17 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2014 at 11:11 pm
Jkat17 BRONZE, Kotzebue, Alaska
3 articles 4 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't worry about it

I hate when that happens..