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Im Fine Without You

April 29, 2014
By JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
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I am his
he is mine
we are together.

I was his
he was mine
we were together.

That is going through my mind
like a wave
crashing on the shore.

But what does it mean?
we were perfect.
But then
it happened.

My moon is dark.
I am falling off my feet.
I cant see,
or hear,
or feel,
or smell,
or taste.

I want to see him,
but I cant.
I want to hear him,
but I cant.
I want to feel his
hand on mine,
but I cant.
I want to smell
his scent,
but I cant.
I want to taste
his lips on mine
but I cant.

I decide to go
and taste again.

Ill show him,
I'm fine without you.
Someone else is all I need.

I will be his,
he will be mine,
and we will be together.

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This article has 4 comments.

on Sep. 27 2014 at 11:00 pm
Crystallite BRONZE, Santa Elena, Other
2 articles 2 photos 347 comments
OMG  LOVE THIS POEM its so beautiful and kinda sad and just wow. i like the ending too! have hope in love <3

on Sep. 11 2014 at 7:51 pm
PureDrawings BRONZE, Chandler, Arizona
3 articles 43 photos 230 comments
Wow.. i felt every word... im truly speechless. You took me back to many many times where this was said in my head.. good job

Dezarae SILVER said...
on May. 21 2014 at 11:48 pm
Dezarae SILVER, Wentzville, Missouri
5 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When your going through hell, keep going."

I think this is the best peom of yours that I have read so far. There is so much emotion in the short stanzas and it really speaks to me. I also love your use of repetition. 

on May. 13 2014 at 1:53 pm
Hells_Will SILVER, Davenport, Washington
7 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Wrists are for bracelets, not cutting" - Kellin Quinn

Good job! I liked how you said you  were going to move on...but... WHO THE EF IS THIS ABOUT!!!! HUH GIRL!!?? TELL ME NOW!!!!!! lol