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The Ocean Life

May 1, 2014
By JasonHub274 GOLD, Mysore, Other
JasonHub274 GOLD, Mysore, Other
16 articles 5 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am what I am...I live for myself, not others....

The life under the ocean
Is so fantastic
With water plants and animals
Playing without sticks.

The fishes are around
Blue, green and red
Without the artificial
Fish foods to be fed.

There are many types of fish
Whales, sharks and dolphins
With many kinds of plants
Of different shades.

The sea plants are scary
Queer, wild and fun
Made of quite few colours
Sizes, shapes and never weigh a ton.

It is not only fun
In the day but also night
The twinkling stars above
Make the ocean bright.

The days are warm
And the nights are cool
Oh! my what a lovely
Place the ocean seems.

It's not just a fairy tale
To me it's all true
The mermaids, dolphins and fishes
Are all my friends too!

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This article has 3 comments.

on Mar. 31 2015 at 8:54 pm
guard-girl GOLD, Clover, South Carolina
10 articles 11 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Trust in the Lord with all your heart, and do not depend on your own understanding. Seek His will in all you do, and he will show you which path to take."
Proverbs 3:5-6

I like it! It's really sweet and it makes me smile :) good job :)

KingFoe SILVER said...
on Jun. 18 2014 at 5:11 pm
KingFoe SILVER, Morristown, New Jersey
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yeah if you're gonna make it rhyme or almost ryhme make sure it flows really well

on Jun. 11 2014 at 2:17 pm
WinterRose76 SILVER, Ok., Florida
6 articles 6 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise and be all that you dream - Flyleaf

Cute poem! It's imaginative and interesting to read. My only suggestions are to work on writing more fluently, and be more consistent with your rhyming. Some stanzas rhyme while others don't, which seems alittle odd. Other than that, I think it's a great piece. 4/5