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Red Revenge

November 3, 2014
By Armadeus_Zoolitzer GOLD, Ratter Corner, Other
Armadeus_Zoolitzer GOLD, Ratter Corner, Other
15 articles 11 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Arose by any other name is still the past tense of arise." Steve Patterson on CBC's The Debators "The devil's greatest trick was chopping the water into separate bathtubs. Then attaching claws to those bathtubs." Bob Schofield's The Inevitable June

Water under the bridge
Except the current is thicker.
Red like blood-
I better swim quicker.
The feeling of drowning
Like a stick in mud-
Rush to warn the people I love
To be expecting a flood

The author's comments:

My work, as the saying goes, speaks for itself. I would, however, love feedback on all my writing- including this piece.

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on Nov. 12 2014 at 7:25 pm
RadioFree BRONZE, Quinlan, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
“Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the universe.” -Albert Einstein

These are my favorite kinds of poems. The ending keeps me in suspense, it doesn't explain itself. There are different feelings expressed in few words, making a bigger impact on the reader's experience. Pretty cool.