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Melted Diamonds

November 15, 2014
By EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.


See the snow,
falling down?
Bringing
the left-over coldness
that the stars
had left behind?
They're melted ---


they're melted diamonds
rolling down
on the sky's
face;
for they were
melted
in the sun's
heat.


And now,
they fall freely;
singing
and telling
of their bittersweet
sadness.


The author's comments:

I've just now started seeing snow and tears as melted diamonds, haha. There's no telling what my imagination can imagine or think of, haha. 

 

Thank you for taking the time to read this. :)


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on Dec. 23 2014 at 8:54 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Haha, I'm so glad you love, love, love this, my friend! ^_^ Haha, I have a strange imagination, but I'm glad it helps/makes you everything from a whole new perspective and you cannot get over it. Haha, and the enthusiasm is no problem at all. We need enthusiasm. Thank you so much for commenting and encouraging me, my friend! ^_^ I am so glad you loved it. ^_^

on Dec. 22 2014 at 2:33 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

OOOOH I LOVED this!!! I absolutely adore your comparison of snow to melted diamonds! It makes me see everything from a whole new perspective, and I cannot get over it!! Oh I LOVE LOVE LOVE LLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEE THIS! Sorry for the enthusiasm, IO just really like it haha ^_^

on Dec. 1 2014 at 8:50 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Haha, I have a unique imagination. XP Thank you so much, Renda my friend! For reading my poem and commenting and for encouraging me. And also! I can't wait for snow to come here too. :) Thank you, again! :)

on Dec. 1 2014 at 12:09 pm
Princess.Renda GOLD, Travelers Rest, South Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 159 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All the world is made of faith, trust, and pixie dust." --J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan

I love your imagination, my dear ^^ This is verty creative and wonderfully written. I cannot wait for snow to come towhere I live too :) Keep writing, love :) And stay beautiful <3