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Let Me Go

February 9, 2016
By Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
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Favorite Quote:
I have not failed, I just found 10,000 ways to not succeed.

All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.

Darling why do you love me?
And why do you love me so much?
I don't deserve anything
But you keep on giving me hope.

My darling I don't deserve you,
And I want to let you go.
But you keep coming, keep coming,
Knocking on the door of my heart.

Darling please let me go.
I want to now, let me cry
Let me go breath outside
But you keep me in your loving arms.

Darling I am so sorry,
I don't want your love.
I don't want to love anyone.
I don't deserve love that strong.

The author's comments:

I was thinking of another melancholy song, so this came out of my mind. Enjoy.

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This article has 3 comments.

Saturn. BRONZE said...
on Mar. 16 2016 at 11:15 pm
Saturn. BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
3 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The mind is better than the sword"
-Unknown (I'm too lazy to look it up)
"All warfare is based on deception"
-Sun Tzu

I would kill to get love like this! Thank you for giving me hope.

on Mar. 12 2016 at 3:02 pm
TheShadySideOfCandyland, Chennai, Other
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
This is nice :)

on Feb. 24 2016 at 2:40 pm
AWriter101 SILVER, Rockton, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
being single doesn't mean you are week it means that you are strong enough to wait for what you deserve! -Niall Horan

This is great too, wow!!!