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The Love of Texas

September 8, 2009
By Princess21 BRONZE, Wolfforth, Texas
Princess21 BRONZE, Wolfforth, Texas
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Brown and black horses
Gallop across tumbleweeds
As if No One Exists

Cute Rowdy Cowboys
Dance around Huge Lands of Grass
Until Sunset Hits

Loud, Raging Guns Blow
Far Across the Desert Plains
Upon Dusty Roads

Through Cloudless Blue Skies
Friends Rejoice Amazing Times
Beautiful Texas

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FelipeLeMone said...
on Mar. 14 2017 at 4:40 pm
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Really good, but you didn't use the proper haiku format. The 5-7-5 syllables does not work in the third line because exists has two syllables. It makes 6 syllables instead of five. Overall it was really good! I love the way you described the roads.

on Oct. 11 2014 at 7:58 pm
Honeysuckle55 GOLD, Littleton, Colorado
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I feel like you captured the spirit of Texas perfectly. Good job!

Roylee said...
on Sep. 9 2014 at 11:06 am
Roylee, Murphy, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is good!" Abu Garcia

This is a very heart warming story!