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Simple Signs of Beauty

November 9, 2009
By CASTROLmatt GOLD, Coolidge, Arizona
CASTROLmatt GOLD, Coolidge, Arizona
14 articles 11 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes you have to take life less seriously to get where you want to be."

Her scent in the breeze
Her eyes are brown and lovely
A beautiful smile

Her hair long and brown
Her voice so sweet and so kind
Her touch so, so sweet

Beauty covers her
From up to down, all around
She is so lovely

The author's comments:
I just decided to try out something new and write a Haiku. This is about my best friend and how simple she may look to others, she's beautiful to me, even if that beauty is represented in a simple way.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Dec. 6 2009 at 3:35 pm
munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
18 articles 1 photo 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will become, what I know I am' Michael Jordan

very nice, cute, but didn't like that you used sweet twice in the same verse

on Nov. 28 2009 at 5:35 pm
lovelife365 BRONZE, Silver Spring, Maryland
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
You live, you learn.

really sweet =)

on Nov. 26 2009 at 1:18 pm
NorthernWriter, Fargo, North Dakota
0 articles 0 photos 326 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only dead fish swim with the stream"

Aww! Your friend must be super...."proud" idk how to say it, kinda shy, kinda proud of you to write such a wonderful poem about her.