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A Kiss MAG

April 28, 2010
By RosyOptimism DIAMOND, Coronado, California
RosyOptimism DIAMOND, Coronado, California
72 articles 31 photos 56 comments

So soft, so luscious
Across my cheek it brushes
And my breath rushes

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on Jul. 11 2012 at 2:04 pm
phlogiston ELITE, Hermitage, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"A day without laughter is a day wasted" -Charlie Chaplin

This was absolutely beautiful. So much imagery with so little words. Great work!

on Dec. 22 2011 at 1:48 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Compelling imagery~ describes a real kiss

on Sep. 11 2011 at 5:52 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

I want a virtual kiss and a real kiss! mwah!

on May. 24 2011 at 9:20 am
beautifulxdisaster GOLD, Parma, Ohio
18 articles 0 photos 10 comments
This is really good, sounds like my first kiss. (:

Aemma SILVER said...
on Apr. 26 2011 at 9:31 pm
Aemma SILVER, Ellenwood, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity;
and I'm not sure about the universe." -Einstein

"A room without books is like a body without a soul." -Cicero

This is really sweet :) I like it 

on Jun. 7 2010 at 6:38 pm
RosyOptimism DIAMOND, Coronado, California
72 articles 31 photos 56 comments
Thank you! I am sure you have read this before, but I am a fan of your poetry also.

on Jun. 7 2010 at 1:08 pm
lilly_valley GOLD, Shiloh, Ohio
11 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of chocolates...you never know what your gonna get. :)

this is really good...it reminds me of my first kiss. thats the good thing about haiku... your trying to describe something in just a few short lines...keep writing your awesome

Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2010 at 11:24 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

I agree with TUBBZ-6 Add few more lines, it will make it more intresting, I like the way it rhymes by the way!

on May. 26 2010 at 1:54 pm
TUBBZ-6 PLATINUM, Norwich, New York
22 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To the well-organized mind, death is but the next great adventure." - Harry Potter (Daniel)

you should have a little more detail it sounds like your first kiss