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Wishes

June 21, 2014
By EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.


Said my wishes
with only the breeze to hear. . .
my wishes far and near.


The author's comments:
I know this isn't a perfect haiku. It doesn't have 5, 7, and 5. This is my own kind of haiku. What I'm trying to say in my poem is sometimes my wishes seem so far, and the only one who seems to listen to my wishes is the breeze. But that isn't true, someone listens and it isn't just the breeze, and if you keep on believing, you're wishes will come true.

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on Jul. 15 2014 at 7:57 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Thank you so much, TheComet! ^_^ also, you're welcome, but really I should be thanking you! I know ^_^ someday all my wishes will come true, as impossible and hard as it seems. Thank you again, dear. 

on Jul. 15 2014 at 1:11 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

You're right! sometimes wishes seem so far away and just impossible to come true but life has thaught to be patient and hold on no matter how long it takes cuz the Lord above never forgets us He's listening to every prayer and someday soon Wishes will come TRUE. great job even though it's short but somehow It makes all sense ^_^ thanks for sharing this

on Jul. 15 2014 at 10:21 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Thank you! You're the first one who has commented on this poem! ^_^ I'm sure, you could write a haiku as lovely as this! I have faith in you. You could write a even greater one than me! : )

on Jul. 14 2014 at 9:18 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

This is really good, I wish I could write a haiku as lovely as this. :)