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December 29, 2008
By sammyso3 SILVER, Hastings, Nebraska
sammyso3 SILVER, Hastings, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"We have to be continually jumping off cliffs and developing our wings on the way down." Kurt Vonnegut


Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.



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MoyruhJO GOLD said...
on Jul. 20 2009 at 1:53 am
MoyruhJO GOLD, Chesapeake, VA, Virginia
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That was fantastic. I truly envy people who can write haiku. :] Sorry for that fail. I really enjoyed that. A well structured haiku without that cute-sy feel most haiku have.

on May. 16 2009 at 8:39 pm
really brilliant

only a few short words but so full of feeling and emotion

DoLL_F@C3 said...
on May. 16 2009 at 6:48 pm
DoLL_F@C3, Memphis, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"FORGIVING YESTERDAY, LIVING FOR TODAY, NOT WORRIED BOUT TOMORROW." Doll

its short but sweet

on May. 16 2009 at 1:39 pm
Xinwen PLATINUM, Brossard, Other
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This is beautifully-written haiku. You waste not your 17 syllables. :)

Catlady SILVER said...
on Apr. 28 2009 at 7:01 pm
Catlady SILVER, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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that cute

on Apr. 27 2009 at 8:58 am
Kumanga DIAMOND, Bethel, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
Always Accept nd love urself for who u are!

its so short.. but good

on Apr. 21 2009 at 4:32 am
scotchtapedreams, Teaneck, New Jersey
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Haiku - good ones - are my favorite style of poetry. This one is fabulous; I think one of the bests I have ever read. Kudos. Stunning and outstanding the way you have crammed such imagery and feelings of innocence in such a tiny space.

on Apr. 12 2009 at 11:08 pm
Michelle Surka GOLD, Hopkinton, Massachusetts
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reminds me of my sunday mornings. very nice.

on Apr. 11 2009 at 10:19 pm
horseluva BRONZE, Midlothian, Virginia
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BRILLIANT!!!

dot.! BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2009 at 2:25 pm
dot.! BRONZE, Acworth, Georgia
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short and sweet! you got so much emotion into just 3 lines! i loved it!! can you please tell me what you think of my poem?? TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/91361/Trapped thanks!!

on Apr. 4 2009 at 2:37 am
CloudedCrystal SILVER, Florissant, Missouri
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I love how you packed soo much meaning into just those 3 lines. Luv ur poem! Short, meaningful...just right.

on Mar. 21 2009 at 6:13 pm
ImDumbStruck DIAMOND, Springfield, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, destroy any evidence."

ha this is cute ^_^

morndas BRONZE said...
on Mar. 19 2009 at 3:40 pm
morndas BRONZE, Joliet, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"We’re all going to die, all of us, what a circus! That alone should make us love each other but it doesn’t. We are terrorized and flattened by trivialities, we are eaten up by nothing.” -Charles Bukowski

Short, sweet, and full of meaning. Love it.

on Mar. 18 2009 at 8:19 pm
SillySarah BRONZE, Covert, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Live today as if there is no tomorrow.

simply cute

on Mar. 15 2009 at 7:17 pm
project827 GOLD, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Real Revolution Starts At Learning, If You're Not Angry, Then You Are Not Paying Attention" - Tim McIlrath

short, sweet, and full of awesomeness. keep it up.

on Mar. 14 2009 at 8:44 pm
its simple and cute, effective and adorable most haikus are supposed to be wriiten about nature but this poem could change that i guess it is the small things that matter "cups of good coffee"

getit69 said...
on Mar. 13 2009 at 5:49 pm
Very simple yet very effective. It shows that just simple moments with your loved one is all that matters to you not just the material things in life.

on Mar. 6 2009 at 11:07 pm
Poetrywritter BRONZE, Seneca, South Carolina
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It's simple. i like it

on Mar. 4 2009 at 12:41 pm
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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Cute.

on Mar. 3 2009 at 8:16 pm
kissingdawn331 SILVER, Palatine, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"when your hourglass runs out of sand you can't flip it over and start again."(changes weekly so check next weeks l8er)

like i said..short and sweet great hiku