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December 29, 2008
By sammyso3 SILVER, Hastings, Nebraska
sammyso3 SILVER, Hastings, Nebraska
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We have to be continually jumping off cliffs and developing our wings on the way down." Kurt Vonnegut


Sunday mornings with
You, my dear, are a thousand
Cups of good coffee.



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on Sep. 14 2011 at 4:31 pm
bpjrobert SILVER, Wakefield, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Veni Vidi Vici"-Julius Caesar

I liked it a lot.

Kirsten L. said...
on Sep. 6 2011 at 3:18 pm
Aww! This was so sweet! :D

weasel123 said...
on Sep. 6 2011 at 10:31 am
weasel123, Carrollton, Texas
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I like this poem its nice an simple. It also delivers a strong message. Good poem.

on Aug. 31 2011 at 12:29 pm
tooswaggedout, Dallas, Texas
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I didn't really like that the Haiku only had one comparison. In my opinion, well written Haikus should give out several message. I liked the idea of waking up on a Sunday morning and having coffee with your Sweetheart, it gave off a warm tone. 

 


Harebelle GOLD said...
on Aug. 19 2011 at 10:51 am
Harebelle GOLD, Vancouver, Other
14 articles 1 photo 118 comments
I really, really love this. It's so natural in the Haiku form, it reads like you had a story and told it, not like you had a story and then crammed it into set numbers of syllables. Great job!

TaleGate GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 8:56 pm
TaleGate GOLD, Clackamas, Oregon
10 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you want the rainbow, you must put up with the rain."

Sweet thanks. I hope I didn't come off as too snobbish O.o

on Aug. 15 2011 at 9:41 pm
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
5 articles 3 photos 178 comments
TaleGate^ completely agree

on Aug. 15 2011 at 8:40 pm
Lola_Black GOLD, Harrison, Michigan
11 articles 2 photos 276 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I've always been famous. It's just everybody's just now finding out." --Lady Gaga

That's so sweet! I must say, I've read tons of haikus but I've never enjoyed any more than I have this. Keep writing! (By the way, if anybody wants to read any of my poems, please do!)

on Aug. 15 2011 at 7:51 pm
xxEbonyxx SILVER, McKinney, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Take me as I am

If you tried to write a eighteen-stanza poem with as much meaning as this haiku has, you would fail. I love it completely!

A_____ said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 5:18 pm
A_____, Columbus, Ohio
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Whoops, that was supposed to be a new comment, not a reply. Sorry!

A_____ said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 5:18 pm
A_____, Columbus, Ohio
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This makes me feel warm and happy and satisfied.  It shares a striking resemblance with good coffee. (:

on Aug. 15 2011 at 4:24 pm
Norma-Bernard GOLD, Moosic, Pennsylvania
14 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When a door closes, somewhere out there a window opens."

I have tried haiku a million times and it's never been this good. Did you write this before your coffee or after???? lol jk. Either way, I love it. Check out my work please and see what you think. :)

Janeyy BRONZE said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 1:49 pm
Janeyy BRONZE, Vancouver, Other
4 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams\" <3

Aww, I LOVE this! Its so cute, cozy and sweet :) I Love how it captures everything in just a couple of lines. I really love this so much. So refreshing!

TaleGate GOLD said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 1:25 pm
TaleGate GOLD, Clackamas, Oregon
10 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you want the rainbow, you must put up with the rain."

As an author, I feel like it's good as it is. Doesn't need to be longer. I personally love coffee on a Sunday morning. It's refreshing. If it went on too much longer, it'd just drag on. It's meant to be short I think.

nai.n.n. said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 11:38 pm
love it... but it's really short. it's cute and sweet, but it has to be more powerful if it's only going to be that short...

on Jul. 24 2011 at 8:52 am
HollyBell BRONZE, Orpington, Kent, Other
3 articles 0 photos 23 comments

A short straight to the point poem like a breathe of fresh air. Great job.

Check out mine? - I'm desperate for comments :3  TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/350551/Kings-Cross/


on Jul. 16 2011 at 10:40 am
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 769 comments
WOW!! great poem! so simple and nice! Great job! I just wrote two books called nightstalker and the beast. please check them out and read them, and make sure u post comments! Thanks! :D

Issie BRONZE said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 8:26 am
Issie BRONZE, Chestnut Ridge, New York
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
ce'est la vie!!!!

short and sweet! it's amazing how so few words can say so much- something so significant. especially for people who like coffee! and sorry to advertise here, but i just submitted my first stuff-please give me feed-back

on Jul. 13 2011 at 3:13 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Could you look at my haiku poems Doubt, All Alone, and Seeing Your Soul, please? Thank you!

S M Wells said...
on Jul. 5 2011 at 12:12 pm
I would say, if, the author relplys to our comments.