Blurring Lines | Teen Ink

Blurring Lines

January 1, 2015
By MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
116 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.” -Mae West
"It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things." - Leonardo Da Vinci

Lines blur; sight leaves me.

Difference between wrong and right-

the idea tears at me.

Similar Articles


This article has 2 comments.

on Jan. 5 2015 at 6:04 pm
Richcoca PLATINUM, Canoga Park, California
44 articles 5 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Make as many as mistakes as you want, just don't make the same mistake.

It may be 5,8,6 but this poem is still great. Love it. You encompassed the ideas that tear at all of us.

on Jan. 4 2015 at 8:03 pm
kennedyshine PLATINUM, Corte Madera, California
44 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
The perpetual pursuit for an unattainable freedom

Nice poem, but I think You've confused the rules of Haikus. It's 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables