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A Death of a Brother

December 16, 2015
By Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
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Favorite Quote:
I have not failed, I just found 10,000 ways to not succeed.

All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.

Brother left too soon
No time to say my goodbyes
But always cherished

Shed you woeful tears
This fateful day has passed
But the tears remain

Death taking his love
Ripping a hole in our heart
Taking my brother

The author's comments:

For my brother, who past away, making this Christmas more darker for me and my family. 

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on Mar. 28 2016 at 1:45 am
MacK-Potato BRONZE, Beloit, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"You're going to rattle the stars, you are"-Treasure Planet

im sorry about your loss, your poem is very beautiful

on Jan. 4 2016 at 10:21 am
Trench_Coat BRONZE, PERU, Indiana
2 articles 1 photo 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Promise me you'll survive.
That you won't give up,
no matter what happens,
no matter how hopeless"- Titanic

I'm so sorry your brother died. I just hope you'll get better. You did good on the poem.