betrayl | Teen Ink


October 5, 2009
By alvina PLATINUM, Punta Gorda, Florida
alvina PLATINUM, Punta Gorda, Florida
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i know i may have batrayed you
i know it really hurt
i know it may not be easy
i know it may not be fun
as every day passes
by minute,
by second
by hour
every second i think you want me to jump off a tower
i understand you dont want to talk, so i will
i know you may hate me now
but i cant help it because im not sure how
what im trying to say is
i wish you would forgive me
but apparently thats just not so
you were my best friend, but that flew out the window
i lost my best friend
for now and forever
and you turned your back on me so now i wont even try
we are friends no longer
now its my time to fly

ill bid you farewell
for now and forever
goodnight and good bye
as i try not to remember

The author's comments:
i wrote this for my best friend when we got into an argument. she didnt talk to me for a month but when i wrote this and gave it to her she forgave me. im just so happy to submit this

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on Jan. 10 2010 at 5:36 pm
alvina PLATINUM, Punta Gorda, Florida
21 articles 0 photos 14 comments
........................................thank you

Katrap BRONZE said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 7:44 pm
Katrap BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you're gonna get." Forest Gump

This is really good. It's so true though some friends will fight and then it's never the same after wards, you did a good job in describing that.