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oh tearless moon

November 29, 2009
By shivasfire PLATINUM, Ashland, Oregon
shivasfire PLATINUM, Ashland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"I will never let schooling interfere with my education." (-forgot who it's by though)
also "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace."-Jimi Hendrix

Time goes by, but none too soon,
staring upon a smiling moon.
Oh moon what secrets you must keep,
I wonder how you do not weep.
Confusion, lies, and hatred all,
and you sit calmly on your wall,
of stars and planets you never fall.
Oh moon what secrets you must keep,
I wonder how you do not weep.

The author's comments:
while i was backpacking last summer

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on Dec. 26 2009 at 6:32 pm
Grania PLATINUM, Portland, Maine
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This is a great poem. It is short, but it gets straight to the point and it went straight to my heart. Keep it up!

emily12mhs said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 7:56 pm
The flow throughout this poem is great! The picture you have attached is very beautiful.

on Dec. 15 2009 at 10:30 am
Writing_Hippie BRONZE, Eatonville, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
It's all about choices!

Wow, i love this poem!!! Very expressive!!!