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never let me go

November 24, 2009
By alvina PLATINUM, Punta Gorda, Florida
alvina PLATINUM, Punta Gorda, Florida
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everyday i look at you
wonder what you think
thoughts start running through my head
faster than a blink
i smile shyly
you smile back
i feel like im bout to have a heart attack

will you ever know
will you ever care
who knows how it will end
maybe in tears
if youre reading this
i want you to know
its you i want to love me
and never let me go

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Victoriaaa14 said...
on Apr. 16 2010 at 9:42 am
Victoriaaa14, Saugus, Massachusetts
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its greattt :) Very cute.


Meago GOLD said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 9:14 am
Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
How come when you need something the most- that's the time when you have to fight the hardest to receive it?

I agree! It's so sweet and so full of emotion. I love it! =D

Katrap BRONZE said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 7:59 pm
Katrap BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you're gonna get." Forest Gump

Good poem, it seems very heartfelt. :D

on Dec. 24 2009 at 11:44 pm
miz.pretty.yung.thang SILVER, Fortmill, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
The love that lasts the longest is the love that is never returned