Lifeless | Teen Ink


December 30, 2009
By Leigh GOLD, Toledo, Ohio
Leigh GOLD, Toledo, Ohio
13 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When there are so many words to say thats when you can't say any words at all."

Walk me into the empty green pine,
Leave me with ideas that I can call mine.
Let me feel the crisp air hit my plan face ,
Let me enjoy the beauty of one place.
Standing in the fallen snow in my ever lasting time , Thinking how stillness could ever be a crime.
As the small drops of sparkling coldness fall from the sky,
I wonder how a life could ever die.
So leave me in the pure chilling snow ,
For in a place of frozen simpleness I learn to never let go.

The author's comments:
Close your eyes and have someone read this poem and let the image of a beautiful winter snow come to mind.

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This article has 2 comments.

on Feb. 23 2010 at 1:17 pm
Malory_Sturling BRONZE, Medford, Massachusetts
2 articles 1 photo 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Good writing can make you look at something unbelievable and doubt yourself by believing that it is real." ♥

"You can get a thousand compliments, but one failure can tear you down; don't let it."
~Malory Sturling ♥

that was amazing. i got chills from reading it. GREAT! (:

on Jan. 19 2010 at 10:52 am
BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
4 articles 0 photos 37 comments
Beautiful, Leigh i really enjoyed it!!!