Quiet | Teen Ink


January 19, 2010
By exeriance BRONZE, DeBerry, Texas
exeriance BRONZE, DeBerry, Texas
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In a loud world
see the quiet girl
stone dead eyes
holding back the lies
rubies on her wrist
heart a clenched fist
god shes there
does nobody care
the crumpled soul
with no where to go
death a promising fate
the trigger a warm bait
someone look because there she goes
a cold dead girl,that no one knows

The author's comments:
I wrote this about teens who hide what they are really feeling and hope that people who are so deeply concerned with their own lives will stop to really see the people around them before it's to late

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on Feb. 10 2010 at 3:45 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

your poem really spoke to me. im a teen and i can relate to that. poeple really should start to notice us b/c some of us can't make it on our own