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Always, I Will? Part 2

June 17, 2010
By shivasfire PLATINUM, Ashland, Oregon
shivasfire PLATINUM, Ashland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"I will never let schooling interfere with my education." (-forgot who it's by though)
also "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace."-Jimi Hendrix

So far away to this day was I in mind and soul.
As I've grown older but none the wiser for this I've never foretold.
Who could've known this would've happened
amongst all who tried to "aid"--
on the abandonment of a safety net I tried so hard to make.
Days to weeks to months, one year?
Ha! Maybe I'm not ready for that gear.
I may have grown older but none the wiser
and I can't handle that fear.
But it's ok as long as it never relates-
Ok! You've had it worse!
I see it, you're right, now leave me be.
Now please, you have no need to leave,
'cause I will take the honor.
I hope though, in time, you'll notice I've faltered.
I wanted you soo bad--more than anything.
But all you can see is a useless, pointless, nothing.
So until the time you truly see;
fine. I'm done. Now leave me be.

The author's comments:
about the ex. . . thank god he's an ex! ;-)

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Shahed GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 4:31 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

I havent read the 1st part, but I love this!!  I can tell you that he lost  a treasure ..  God bless! God bless God bless! 5/5 ,,

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