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Majestic Beauty

May 7, 2012
By AngelsLullaby GOLD, Neverland, Idaho
AngelsLullaby GOLD, Neverland, Idaho
12 articles 7 photos 95 comments

Favorite Quote:
Music is a higher revelation from wisdom and philosophy. ~Ludwig Von Beethoven

“Dear horse, majestic creature.” I smile and sighed
As he and I sauntered through our daily ride
My heart grew warm
As we braved the storm
And on the way home I cried.

The author's comments:
This is the first limerick I've written in awhile. It's dedicated to my beautiful American Draft horse.

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butterfly123 said...
on May. 27 2012 at 10:27 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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hey! very very vute. i like the natural flow, it did not seem even a little bit forced. 5/5 from me too. great work and keep writing :D

on May. 22 2012 at 11:35 pm
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
17 articles 1 photo 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you're not 1st you're last"

wow if was cute and then that last line just hit it home 5/5